So, I did have my story up for a couple days, but because I just don't trust people I took it down and if you want to read it, just send me an e-mail at: suzy.petersen@live.com and I will e-mail you a copy!!!
Thanks for posting, Suz! Aside from a couple of misspellings (bear/bare, isle/aisle), it's captivating. I've also read parts of the one that you sent to Pete to read...hope you don't mind. Liked that one, too.
I love it! It really brings back memories of lovely Utah Valley. :) If only Provo boys were that friendly!! I don't think I could have gotten one of them to notice me if I did a freakin' tapdance in front of him!! Sad. I'm not as cute as Kyla, I guess! :) But it was engaging and kept me interested, which is great. And you're doing a good job of characterizing Kyla.
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Thanks for posting, Suz! Aside from a couple of misspellings (bear/bare, isle/aisle), it's captivating. I've also read parts of the one that you sent to Pete to read...hope you don't mind. Liked that one, too.
Hey thanks, Nat...I wrote this at like 1:00 AM and so I wasn't really paying tons of attention to spelling.
I love it! It really brings back memories of lovely Utah Valley. :) If only Provo boys were that friendly!! I don't think I could have gotten one of them to notice me if I did a freakin' tapdance in front of him!! Sad. I'm not as cute as Kyla, I guess! :) But it was engaging and kept me interested, which is great. And you're doing a good job of characterizing Kyla.
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